LadyEvvy

Thank you for the review! Good to see a little bit of Kitty Jones coming through.

Hey! So sorry for my late reply, I'm away on spring break! Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you like Siren. I love her more and more ...

Thank you for the advice! I'll look into those things when I revise this.

Hey, sorry for the late reply! Thank you so much for the review! I see what you mean about the redundancy and I'll try to fix it in the future. ...

Thank you! It seems I need to work on my grammar.

You're welcome! I hope I wasn't too harsh since I really did enjoy the story. I'd love to read it once it's published!

Thank you so much!. Don't worry, you definitely weren't too hard on me. I can see a lot of your points and I'll make sure to look into them when ...

Thank you so much for all the reviews! I really appreciate the help and you make some good points. I'll definitely look into these things when I make my revisions.

Thank you! I didn't realize I was missing so many commas.

I just realized I forgot to reply to this! Sorry about that! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! The interaction between Kou and Siren is going to be very interesting. ...

You're welcome! I think your opening sentence is actually quite creative and introduces the scenario pretty well. I personally think you should keep it.

Thank you so much for the review! I always struggle with descriptions, and the comments you made here will definitely help. I'm always tend to skip over environments. This is ...

Hey, Poseidon, thanks for the review! The first issue you brought up was actually intentional. The implication was that Anton would better be able to predict future events if he ...

I always wish I could meet some of my characters in real life. Kou is the kind of person I could sit down to watch a movie with. You have ...

Thank you for the review! I've actually noticed how often I use sentences with two clauses, but I usually only catch myself doing it with essays and schoolwork. I hadn't ...