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Re: A LOVE FOR CONFIDENCE
Hallo Justwrite3, I'm here to give you a review of your poem. The title caught my attention and I thought I'd give it a go :) The first stanza, it ...
Jun 19, 2020 -
Re: Theatre [edited]
Hi, watcha! Today I'm going to be leaving a brief review of your poem! I love the imagery you portray, along with the flow. The detail is very well done ...
Jun 18, 2020 -
Re: New Prologue to my book
HI, Lee! I’m here to start reviewing the work I’ve been hearing so much about! Yes, I do all my things that should be quotes in bold. Why? Because it’s ...
Jun 16, 2020 -
Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 16]
Hi, Libs! This is long so I'll just get straight into it =) It was afternoon when everything was packed up. Obraya had magicked the couples’ messenger bag so that ...
Jun 15, 2020 -
Re: Hands that Don't Love
Hi Em, the description under the title caught my attention, so here we are! Let me tell you what I thought of this :) The lines feel metaphorical yet kind ...
Jun 15, 2020 -
Re: From East to West
Hey Haraya! I'm Jade and I'm going to be reviewing your poem! First of all, your unique description and format caught my eye. It's beautiful and well-done. I'm not just ...
Jun 13, 2020 -
Re: They Say When You're 16
Hello, Em! I'm Jade and today I'm going to be reviewing your poem! The first stanza flows well and is very enticing, so no complaints there, but the second feels ...
Jun 12, 2020 -
Re: Reminisces of Jack Frost the Third (Chapter 3)
Hi Gravel, I'm here to leave a quick review, as I'm very burnt out at the moment, mainly just my overall thoughts on this chapter. The italicization feels forced, almost ...
Jun 11, 2020 -
Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 6
HI Honora. Professor Jade here to give you another quick review, as I am still rather drained. What I liked: The progress you're making in this story, the pacing is ...
Jun 11, 2020 -
Re: i???m more than a body
Hallo Harper/Lulon, I'm here to review your work since the name caught my eye. First of all, allow me to give some recommendations! You may want to work on a ...
Jun 10, 2020 -
Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 5
Hi Hon, it's Jade! Today's review is going to be rather short, as I'm busy with school but let me make it as useful to you as I can! =) ...
Jun 9, 2020 -
Re: Who Are You?
Hello Manilla! I'm here to review your art piece. I usually review novels, so I don't know how well I'll do, but I hope I can help! THINGS I LIK: ...
Jun 7, 2020 -
Re: Reminisces of Jack Frost the Third (Chapter 2)
A faint glow from the sky above lit the room. The throne's imposing presence glistened with crimson light, which shone in through the open roof. Alright, now my first point ...
Jun 6, 2020 -
Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 4
Hi Honny, it's Professor Jade, let's begin! This one is long, so I'll tell you how many characters it is! "Gideon, quit it!" I screeched, completely at my wits end ...
Jun 5, 2020 -
Re: Reminisces of Jack Frost the Third (Chapter 1)
Tem! I'm here to review. Let's just get into it, shall we =) Jack walked across the thirty two thousand feet high platform. The platform was narrow and surprisingly empty. ...
Jun 4, 2020
