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LadyAstella

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 31

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    I have it better than some people. I hurt more than some. Some hurt more than me. Some hurt just like me. Some hurt differently than me. I am rich ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Conics Unfortunately: 64

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    I have it better than some people. I hurt more than some. Some hurt more than me. Some hurt just like me. Some hurt differently than me. I am rich ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: I am

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    I have it better than some people. I hurt more than some. Some hurt more than me. Some hurt just like me. Some hurt differently than me. I am rich ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Supernatural Re: Phantom - 1.1

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    I have it better than some people. I hurt more than some. Some hurt more than me. Some hurt just like me. Some hurt differently than me. I am rich ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Insomnia

    Hi, I'm giving you a review but it is gonna be a quicky because of course I'm in school. Haha, so I loved your writing, very clean, very precise. It ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Till I met you

    This is true love from sister to sister or sister to brother. It was very heart warming, and pulled on my heartstrings! Its amazing. I think this is how every ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Marcia and Me: Chapter Two

    ""Can you teach me?" Danni asked eagerly. "What, to go completely undetected? Do you have two years to practice?" "No!" she laughed. "The simple one." "Oh, right. Of course I ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 18.2

    Very good. I loved this. The thought, the emotion, the intensity. All of it, very good. I would definitely read more of your work. Please keep writing. ""You've done enough," ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Music

    This is amazing, so intense, emotional, and so so relatable! Music is such an inspiration to many people. You just took that inspiration and turned into a writing. If you ...

    May 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 9

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    Congratulations! You’re not perfect! It’s ridiculous to want to be perfect anyway. But then, everybody’s ridiculous sometimes, except perfect people. You know what perfect is? Perfect is not eat

    May 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 11

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    Congratulations! You’re not perfect! It’s ridiculous to want to be perfect anyway. But then, everybody’s ridiculous sometimes, except perfect people. You know what perfect is? Perfect is not eat

    May 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 8

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    Congratulations! You’re not perfect! It’s ridiculous to want to be perfect anyway. But then, everybody’s ridiculous sometimes, except perfect people. You know what perfect is? Perfect is not eat

    May 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Cedar Ravine: 6.1

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    here’s to the kids. the kids who would rather spend their night with a bottle of coke and Patrick or Sonny playing on their headphones than go to some vomit-stained ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 3 of Malgrave

    "Briar took the boys back into the lobby. She was about to take them back outside when Seamus asked, "What about upstairs?" This is great grammer, and dialogue. This story ...

    May 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Beautiful Girls

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMM

    May 9, 2018


A day without sunshine is like, you know, night.
— Steve Martin