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Re: The Golden Cradle
Hi, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. I tiptoed around the castle till I saw the window decorated with gold, it shined above all the dull ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: The Artisan (Chapter One)
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Aria hummed to her song, Into the Unknown, as she painted the wall of the alleyway behind Rigio’s Pizza ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: Help Me Find Philip - Prologue - 684 Words
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Sabrina was tasked with cleaning out the attic. She loved her great-great-aunt Ida (everyone did) but Ida was a ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: MTOHS - Chapter 1.2
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. The target bolted off his pedestal and shoved past a few normals in his way. I followed just as ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Memories Tattooed On His Skin (MTOHS) - Chapter 1.1
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Dusk had faded into a starless night as the last of the sunset’s light bled away, replaced by a ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Paths Crossed chapter 10
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. The world slowed as I admired the golden field beside our camp site. Ice settled over the wheat left ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Paths Crossed Chapter 7
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. A door creaked open, causing me to jump out of my relaxed subconcious. I kept my eyes closed as ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Finders Ch.3
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Leikin awakes to patchy sunlight as it falls through the canopy, where am I? Could this be Fern Grove? ...
Jan 26, 2021 -
Re: First Love (1/3)
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Nancy Austin was a pretty girl, shy and sweet. Her strawberry blonde hair was cropped at her chin, and ...
Jan 25, 2021 -
Re: Squirrel and Juniper Trees: Chapter 1
Hi, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Raymie's footsteps scuffed along the ruins of the building. Her leather Romeos were slightly over-sized and her small figure ...
Jan 22, 2021 -
Re: Set Adrift (Part 4)
Hello, LUNARGIRL 🌑 here with a review! Let's get straight to it. The Koth brought Ed and Dave into his home, delighted that he was speaking to self-proclaimed revolutionaries. When ...
Jan 20, 2021 -
Re: Set Adrift (Part 3)
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Dave heaved himself at Ed, knocking him to the ground as the shot blasted a hole through the metal ...
Jan 19, 2021 -
Re: Set Adrift (Part 2)
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. Ed and Dave stared into the crate. Inside was a small, 4-person, independent craft. After reading the serial number, ...
Jan 19, 2021 -
Re: Set Adrift (Part 1)
LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. The spacecraft was dark, cold. She drifted through space like flotsam on the open ocean. Her one good engine fired ...
Jan 19, 2021 -
Re: Chapter One
Hello, LUNARGIRL here with a review! Let's get straight to it. A screech filled the midnight sky. Another attack. Another dead body to be dragged away by the monster. It ...
Jan 16, 2021