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sorry I don't do requests, I like them ;)

Actually when I look about it I feel an urge to buy a cat :D . Especially when you watch Space Dandy, There's an alien cat, or cat alien :D ...

Mate, that was one of the harshest critisisms I've seen for a while... Review mine too...

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yes putting the beginning in a present tense would make it less confusing for a reader. I have changed it several times until I published it, but I wanted to ...

I think stanza separation would be a good addition too and in fact I tried to add it, but it didn't work and I left it like that. any suggestions ...

I'm glad you liked it.

Feel free to criticize Fellows :) , I am looking for improvements. I am a open minded person. If you like it please leave a like and tell me if ...