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I really liked the idea of the whole thing and was very intrigued but you need to go a little more in depth, how did these men come to know ...

It is a very beautifully written poem but like Juniper pointed out there are to many somethings. It embodies winter well and the vivid descriptions help the reader feel the ...

I know this poem means a lot to you and I'm sorry it ended the way it did. I wish I could rewrite history and take that pain away, but ...

Although I didn't like the fact that she killed Amanda, but now I don't know if I can really blame her. Amanda is a jerk. She definitely should have gotten ...

I really liked Olivia, she was a really strong character... creepy but strong and interesting. Someone should have told her that it isn't good to bottle things up inside, because ...

I really like the descriptions in the poem. I found it a little cryptic myself, but good all the same. "And the tundra's kiss you will find beneath each bed ...

I agree with Sionarama it is a very good piece. I liked the imagery that the words invoked in my mind. I reall liked the last stanza "Until that day ...

I agree with both lavabubblingout and Eraqio on the fact that I didn't really feel the relief or anything that the character was supposed to be feeling but the descriptions ...

I really like the vivid descriptions and the brutal honesty of the words. It is like a void that has become part of everyday life that nothing but what was ...

Like in the first part of the story you need to be careful with the tenses, but I really liked your story. Also be careful where you put 'in' some ...

I really liked the description of the man's personality and how you didn't reveal too much about why each of them came to be in the same place.I also really ...