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Re: Tired
Being a first year college student, I understand your tiredness. This poem really speaks to me and what I've gone through this past year. There have been many days where ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: late may 9th
First off, your capitalization is non-existent and it bugs me. Secondly, I agree with what you’re trying to say and struggle with the same dilemma on a daily basis. I ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Did you see her?
I would like to start off with wow. I love this poem and think you did an amazing job writing it. I may be wrong, but the girl who passed ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: addicted to you
It has a certain darkness to it with the being an alcoholic and addict part. The tone of wanting the person drunk so they will love them is sad, in ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Mr. Homoh Hernaldez
It was really cleverly written, there are just some things that will help it come together better. 1) Give every character a name, it will help the actors feel more ...
May 5, 2014
