Kylan

Well, I can't give you much of a critique due to the lack of...well, everything. But as a quick-write, vent-that-creative build-up, I guess it was fine. Some of the sentence ...

Okay. The main problem with this piece was your structuring. You write in a strange, convoluted style with sentences that kind of wind their way around the page. Much of ...

That was great Sam! You have this way of pulling storytellng off effortlessly and in a way that makes me desperately want more. This piece is lean, dark, attractive, and, ...

Hey there, smorg! This is pretty good. Seeing as I've got some pretty stiff competition on my hands with this piece in the running, I'm surprised how low it sank ...

This was good. I was immediately absorbed into your dialogue and description, which were both well-structured and vibrant. But the plot itself - and the entire storyline for that matter ...

Okay. This started out good, but then steadily went downhill. The main problem you have here, my friend, is your pacing. Or in this case, the lack of. Nearly every ...

This is definately intriguing. Your prose is very tight and to the point. Good qualities. I found myself wanting more. However, this seems like a strange beginning unless it's meant ...

I like it. You are an extremely talented writer. Your characters are stoic, but somehow retain the personality you've dealt out to them and your settings are pristine. However, I ...

You know, I liked this too. I can't necessarily see this being published or winning you hoards of adoring fans, but it's got a simple, attractive quality to it. I ...

The shining characteristic of all of your writing is your strong, clipped, omnipresent voice. You easily describe emotions and personality with each sentence which makes your characters vivid and uniq

Your style is lofty, to say the least. You can effortlessly describe emotions and situations and be satisfying at the same time, but you could easily lose readership with your ...

The premise of this piece reminded me strongly of I Am Legend, which isn't a good thing. Takes place in the near future, humanity is practically wiped out, and monsters ...

This seems more like a blog post than a non-fiction piece. :wink: Anyways, I know how you feel. But I think I know why I write. I write because creating ...

These are some interesting lyrics. I can see the ambiguity between the magician and a lying friend. It's clever and unique. However, your meter seems totally convoluted. I can see ...

That was good. Unfortunately, the repition did nothing for me. In fact, it weighed down the poem like a fruitcake with too many dried apples :wink: . If you want ...