Korywon

Very well written indeed. The story development flowed and pieced together very well! However my only problem is, what's with the sirens. I would like an explanation of what the ...

This is not bad at all. I think the only reason why you think it's bad is because it's so short, haha. Even as a short story it's still a ...

Oh yes, a Sci-Fi! Yay! I enjoyed it by far. Though however I you to elaborate some more, such as the background knowledge of what he's looking for. Is he ...

I liked that story, it's really nice! ... yet so sad, and I love these touching stories in which you executed quite nicely. Oh, especially the ending, that brought an ...

This is quite a beautiful piece of work. Very descriptive and brilliant use of sentence structure flow. I can quite imagine the scenery right here and personification is nicely executed. ...

I actually //really// like the way this is executed! The overall structure and sentences flowed together very nicely. Thought there were a few mistakes I liked it! I would however ...