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I love your imagination, word choice, passion, and feeling. You are, truly, a great writer. If you are looking to edit or just to improve your next poem, try working ...

I have to say, it's well-crafted. Incredible technique and rhyme, with the rhythm being spot-on. However... This has no hook, nothing memorable or intriguing. It's the kind of thing you ...

At first I thought the first few comments were kinda weird. But then I saw your comment about how you changed it since they commented.. haha. XD I really like ...

What I love about this piece is that you say so much without SAYING it. You can tell that you are very nervous, and uncomfortable, without saying, "I felt nervous ...

I don't know why you say it's confusing. It's intriguing, and detailed. I love how you describe the situation in such detail without ruining the reader's room for imagination. If ...

This is a great poem. Obviously you are an amazing writer. If I were you, I would try to expand this piece a little more to make the point clearer. ...

First of all, you people do NOT know how to give constructive criticism, especially Medusa. Read your work, Medusa, your a great writer. But Christ, please stop commenting, for everyone's ...

First of all, this is a great attempt at a first poem. Mine was worse then this - remember that as I say the following: I do not like this ...

whoah. I am not sure where to start here. Um... first of all, that was a really incredible poem. The structure could have been clearer, and the way that you ...

this poem painted a detailed description of the set without being abrupt - it was very subtle, which is a handy skill to have as a writer. This poem was ...

I think that it didn't need as much explanation in the beginning - it seems almost like a warning, like "look out for this poem! It bites!!" Which isn't a ...

I loved this poem. It had a great feel to it - alive and passionate, with a very clear message and imaginitive rhymes. Your a great poet!! Keep writing, you ...

First, of all, that is freaky in the best way possible. Like, creepy, make-grown-men-cower-in-their-covers-at-night-when-they-hear-a-noise freaky. Only one thing: fascits doesn't rhyme all that well w

I think it's great, but I would like to be introduced to the main character, maybe? The main character could be watching, or could have something to do with the ...

That was amazing, first of all, especially for your first poem and I think that the others are wrong, I love the way that the words are spaced and I ...