KnightlyAngel09

Thank you so much Evi. That was a lot of help. I edited it a little, took note of your comments. I haven't edited the 2nd stanza yet though but ...

Percy Jackson and the Olympians.:) The first book in the series is called The Ligning Thief. It's by Rick Riordan.

Woah. Thanks dd9. Now, I understand the difference. That was a big help and an addition to my literary knowledge.:)

Thank you to everyone who has reviewed. Rhyme ~ In the first two stanzas, you used slant rhyme, but in the last two, you used natural rhyme. I think it'd ...

Er... numbers? They're to mark the lines right? Why are they needed. I threw my concentration off. Anyway, I second the lovely poem comment! This really was beautiful. Wonderful choice ...

You may have read this already, I finished it this morning and it was really good.:) The Time Traveller's Wife by Audrey Niffenegger

Yes, I lost the story. You see, I can't write on the computer so I use paper... And I felt bad wasting good paper on so many drafts so I ...

Thanks darko, June and Yent.:) You already mentioned "courage". It would be better if you find another word. I agree. I was trying to edit it... hmm. Any Suggestions?

i also think it's neat how you find that rhyming poems are easier to write then free verse, because i used to TOTALLY agree... and i love writing rhyming poems, ...

I just pray that she returns and blooms unto me... until then I will love and nurture her resilient bud.... Oh my. That was a beautiful review. It was poetic. ...

Okay, first, I'm a she. :lol: Next, thanks a lot for the reviews. Okay, I am aware of the existence of free-verse but I find it harder than a rhyming ...

Hello. Thanks a lot for reviewing. And no, this wasn't about a real person, just an image from the mind.

Aw. Wuthering Heights was awesome! But Jane Eyre was great as well. Can't choose between those two, they're both great. I love Jane Austen.:) But I did not like Sense ...

I agree with those that posted above me. Write more poetry because this was really good. The emotions were all there and perfectly presented and clear. This was an absolutely ...

I am a Christian as well. I am not insulting anyone or trying to oppose religion or anything. I hope I am not too forward. This is not about God, ...