KnightlyAngel09

Hey, you're a greeter!:) Anyway, this poem was cool. I think that because that it's being straightforwrd just adds so much more to the efficiency of the delivery. It had ...

Well, first of all, your very first line was rather bland. It made your essay sound incredibly academic. Like it was a beginning to a boring lecture in class so ...

Great message and very effective delivery.:) It was great because you presented an issue that is ofetn talked about and written about but presented it in a very original and ...

I really liked this. The idea was so original and the concepts of wonders being incomparable was just awesome. But I do agree that the rhythm is a little off. ...

Your second stanza was quite brilliant. Also, the message of your poem was really clear and the delivery here is great. All in all, it was a really great read. ...

This was really well-written in my opinion. Nothing overboard about the way you wrote about what you felt. The part about cancer was really sad. I partly understand because my ...

I am pretty bad at reviewing on punctuation and capitalization but I'm pretty sure that capitalization is needed in the beginnings of most of your lines. Anyway, I think that ...

Okay. Hello.:) First of all, some errors: over ehating I need you to tell me i'm in your heart, To give my happiness a place to start. The 'i'm' should ...

comments are bold.XD the touch of his skin is so warm in my hand... the punctuation doesn't fit too well, it makes the poem flow rather wrong. and yet his ...

Hello. Well, I thought that there was a strong message and also strong statements in the poem. But I think that your lines are way too long and that the ...

It is really a sad poem. The message I really understand. However, I don't think that the emotions were conveyed too well. I think the first person who reviewed said ...

Hello.:) This poem was great. It was really fresh and the way you use words conjur such a vivid image. The poem also flowed well. Awesome job.:)

Hello. I'm Nixie. I'm kinda new here too. Slightly.XD First of all, I really liked your concept. The suitcase idea is original and I think you painted the picture quite ...

Haloo. I'm Nixie.XD I loved the idea of your poem. It's so modern. Politcal, Economic and Social issues and the line where you say that the leaders are those that ...

I really like this poem. It's free verse and you know how some free verse poems go really overboard with vocabulary to make it sound rather deep? Well, this one ...