KnightlyAngel09

I thought I'd thank you for all the wonderful reviews you've given me. Eh... Forgive me, I do not review well. Come to us who call to thee, Come to ...

Hello. This is quite an interesting poem. The flow is really choppy in the first stanza. It's either you made the line breaks in the wrong places, the lines are ...

You use the most interesting wording. It's very new and quite original. It doesn't echo the imagery of any other poets and still it gives a very vivid picture. Perhaps ...

This is quite a literary analysis. This is the type that criticizes the literary piece by it's characters, right? or is this just a character analysis. I'm quite unsure. I'm ...

Hiya bf.:D Cool that you ended the way you began.:) Rhyming is great, rather like a song though. The rhythm isn't consistent all throughout but I think it works. Except ...

Short and lovely. Word usage is beautiful. Rhythm falters in the fourth line. One syllable too much. Anyway, overall, really pretty. Punctuation has to be fixed though and there's a ...

Brilliant once again. I see you loved those lines as well and so do the others.:) "Into the arid..." You're quite epic, honestly. The wording is beautiful. This is almost ...

What an absolutley powerful and wonderful poem. It's quite amazing how triumph and hope just simmers in your words. Excellent word choices, it has made this poem very vivid. Great ...

Hello bf.:) Ui, pretty poem. Aw, you write such great poetry. haha. random. Uhm... Woah, I can't believe you did the syllables thing. It's really hard to do. Bravo.:) Oh, ...

Absolutely amazing. I can't fault it. Lovely words, excellent structure and excellent rhyming. Imagery all there. Emotions depicted in the most vivid but simple and besutiful way. Quite fascinating ho

It's a great concept to write about. THe utter simplicity of this poem gets the message across quite effectively. However, I think the 3rd to the last stanza of this ...

Hello. I just wanted to tell you that I enjoy your writing. This story has quite swept me away. I find it quite lovely how you can keep the voice ...

Hello.:) I love you, even more than me. I love you, Cant you see? This isn't a very good beginning. It's so cliche that it makes a really weak opening. ...

Hello. Oh, we have the same signature. The Latin part at least. Slight typo on the second to the last line. I believe you mean savior and not savoir. Anyway, ...

Hello. Welcome to the site.:) Punctuation and Capitalization needed. It'll help the flow of this poem. I admire your word usage and imagery. Overall, it creates a powerful effect on ...