KnightZero

Review~ So...pretty good! The concept is rather powerful and of you ask me, pretty decent. It could also be described as emotional to those who have experieced or are currently ...

Review time! Kind of not the best reviewer but you know...it's something. Interesting plot, you drew the characters nicely and showed somewhat of an efficent amount of emotion into the ...

Review time! Okay, I honestly like the overall plot of of story and the gist of it. The concept of this one particular girl who feels like she has failed ...

Ooh! Pretty interesting introduction to the story and has a good seed planted of what is the forecoming. My only concern is the ending with Bennett, and who he/she is ...

Hmm, you indeed have portrayed the semantics of drama. The emotion the main character feels is intense and is clearly irritated about her life and not bringing a fishing pole. ...

Oooh, interesting! This indeed has captured my attention! The way the spacing was put was decently and logically put, making it easier for readers to follow. The suspense and serial ...

The stanzas need a little editing out, and the punctuation isn't really carried out well. Check 'bullying' and 'dying' rhyme schemes, I comprehend that they both end in -ing but ...

Let's just say I LOVED Poe's Annabel Lee poem, and this poem furthered my likings to the poem. The rhyming schemes are correct as far as my knowledge extends, and ...

Interesting plot you have going on, I enjoyed reading it...overall. However, small issues such as the frequent transitions into different scenes fluctuates a bit too much. Perhaps, try to lengthen ...

This is a great piece of literature, overall. Just as RoundSquare has said, despite the grammar mistakes, the imagery that is planted into the mind and the back story, with ...

Okay, I may be an awesome friend or follower or whatever, but 'cha know, reviewing ain't all that bad. Firstly, I'd like to commend you for improving and making the ...