KnightTeen

Thanks, Iggy! I had no idea I never got my secret Santa.

Nice.

Thanks.

Thanks.

Sorry, apparently I removed some of that sentence. I meant that he's more concerned about what comes out of his (and other peoples) mouths then how he acts. He wants ...

Really, I'm just curious but I also think it would look a little better and be a little less confusing. It's a, "Which cousin is which" sort of thing.

No problem, and btw it was supposed to be 'gold star'.

And I must admit, this was not what I was expecting.

Thanks for the feedback!

I think that's it's very good as it is, but I would like to see it expanded. I see a lot of potential here. But it's your work, so do ...

It did help, and thanks for reviewing. The last lines did feel chunky to me, that's going to be edited.

Indeed.

Sorry about the extra space between the second and third stanzas. That's the only way it let me have a space at all.

I'm glad I could help.

And thanks for pointing out the "slight' thing. I hadn't even realized that I had done it.