KnightTeen

Hey, welcome to the site. Barefootrunner has already pointed out your grammar mistakes, so I'm going to save you the trouble and not mention any of those. I know it ...

Amen to that. A world without music would be right up there with how horrible as a life without writing. This was a very beautiful piece, and it was wonderfully ...

Hey, HT here to review. Thanks for the description before hand. Without it, I think that the readers (namely me, since I'm the one writing this) would have got along, ...

One small mistake that I spotted (Sorry, I freely admit that I'm a nitpicker), "But you left me and we ended u like this," I'm assuming that here you meant, ...

I looked for other parts to the story, and found the other 'Felix" script, and they don't match up. That kind of bugs be, because I have no idea what ...

I don't know if you're okay with me reviewing this, but I'm going to go ahead and do it anyway. First of all, thanks for using my birth-town. I lived ...

Ummmm, I'm assuming that this is only part of the poem, but I'm going to analyze it as a whole. I think that you need more content, but I also ...

Umm, I'm with K on this. The color of the words was poorly selected, and I'm not even sure why you did it that way. You might have done it ...

This was extremely well written. Your line structure and spacing is amazing. The same goes for your words, they all fit together seamlessly. The second line has a grammar mistake, ...

I agree largely with Sl4y4, about those to lines not making sense. In addition, the, "People left, I got lift," line is not at all grammatically correct. "I am lifted, ...

Hey, HT here to review. Now, grammatically speaking there are really no errors except in a few instances where you forgot the space between words. Good job on that, I ...

Hey, HT here to review. Okay, as a whole I think that this is very well written. I don't, however think that this belongs in the essay category. It just ...

This is really good. And don't worry, I don't think that any of us will call you out on the issue of your stanzas. All of the poetry writers here ...

Short, sweet, and too the point. I like you already. Hey, HT here to review. Just two little things that I spotted. 1) In the second line you misspelled the ...

This is a really good start to what sounds like a very interesting story. Grammatically speaking, you are perfect. The same applies to your spelling. There were no mistakes as ...