KnightTeen

Hey, Teen here to give a review! I saw your second chapter in the Green Room and decided to tackle this one first so that I understood everything. Nitpicks: Students ...

Can I just say wow? You were introduced to Snarking with Spotswood. I don't have a catchy name, but I do have the ability to give an honest review like ...

Hi! KnightTeen here for a review on this lovely Review day! Chapter 2 You don't need to include this in the text since it is in the title. “any last ...

Hey Green! KnightTeen here for a review. Now, maybe I should get on task. I kind of feel like this is separate from the narrative, and should be a thought ...

Aww, it's the last one for now. I hope you post more soon. Sad face. *perks up slightly* Would you mind letting me know when you post the next chapter ...

Back again! I do wonder about the ranking system in the magic test thing. The higher the number, the better the potential, I should assume? Though I don't understand the ...

Here I am again! Nitpicks first: It wasn’t long before Simon’s ‘challenge’ was issued. How is it Simon's challenge? I notice that you put the word in quotes, and yet ...

Hey GT! KnightTeen here for a review. Let's get the nitpicks out of the way first, shall we? Years of going with my dad have made me sa master of ...

Told you I would be back. :) I swear I am not a stalker! Scouts honor. Oh, wait, I'm not a Scout any more...Oops. Vinnia, however, spoiled the moment by ...

KnightTeen here for a review on this lovely Review Day! Rudi I love that name! Reminds me of Ice Age 3. Rudi sniffled and poked his sausage. “I don’t wanna ...

I have to admit, first of all, I have not read the other chapters of this story. I promise that I will by the end of the summer at least ...

Wow. You are right. This is different. But it's a good different. I like the way that you broke up the lines and the stanzas, this is formatted really perfectly. ...

Seriously, it makes me so mad when I can find nothing to criticize! I feel like if all I do is praise, the author will learn nothing. But, at some ...

I noticed that you had hyphens between the stanzas, and had to ask, "Are you having trouble with your formatting?" If this is the case, try pressing SHIFT before you ...

I agree with what the user below me said. Lengthen this! The parts you have here are good, but could be made sooooo much better if you expanded on them. ...