KnightTeen

This was actually quite a good piece. There is really nothing of importance to complain about. You plot/topic is good, your grammar is good (as far as I can see, ...

Hi, HT here to review on this fine Review-Day. And when I got home, Charlie was waiting. I don't think that you need the, 'and,' here. It wasn’t even the ...

Hey, HT here to review. You're not a dime a dozen, You're more of a penny for your thoughts. Wow, that is really good. If you don't mind, I'm so ...

I use d to swear, there had to be an image Slight edit there. While I sulk in immorality, collapsing under the pressure of conformity. I write to make you ...

“Hell is empty and all the Devils are here.” -William Shakespeare Love the WS quote, he's on of my favorite authors. The wind kicked up, Interesting word choice, where most ...

There's no date or anything here, so I'm assuming that it's the same date as the last chapter. “Go find the headmaster. Top floor.” Regina ordered Isaac into the lift ...

2200 February 20, Capitol of Cerulea, Alpha I love the names of the locations. Is this an alternate Earth? I've probably already asked this, but I forgot. Vivian saw him ...

The truth about love is crying your ass out Because of the language, you need to up the rating and add a language warning. I know it's not much, but ...

Blazing red though some may turn, Others leave a pearly burn. What exactly did you mean by, "turn,"? I'm a little lost here. Morbid thieves of pun and fun. With ...

•I keep trying to space it out into stanzas and lines, but it doesn't seem to be working. You are preaching to the choir. The formatting process bites us all ...

I liked this work a lot. Your punctuation, spelling, and grammar are absolutely perfect. However, you flow feels a little awkward, mostly on the lines that start with "Ever". I ...

You know why I'm here, so let's get down to it, shall we? Sweat beaded across Dr. Ross’ forehead as he strode hurriedly towards lab room eight. Your language is ...

The children have been through the depths of hell And now that they're here, they have stories to tell Why do you have a giant gap between the lines? Do ...

Hello, I'm HT here to review your work. I liked your topic, and I thought that you wrote this very well. I liked how you capitalized the first letter of ...

This is a very good summary. I'm assuming that you placed it in a separate post due to its length and the fact that it would never have fit into ...