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Re: Thin.
Hello, this is your friendly neighborhood HomeschooledTeen, here for a review! Grammatically speaking, you are quite perfect. The same can be said for your punctuation and spelling, for I can ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Don't Smile
Hey MCP, this is your friendly neighborhood HomeschooledTeen here for a review! I felt my heart rate increase and all my senses became intensified the instant the blood vessel in ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: I Could Not Save You
Hey, I'm here to bug review for you again. ..........You cared not that I love you so , for screaming fans all look the same. Personally, I like to see ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Always Come Home
Hey @niteowl! I thought that this was really good. You started off sad, but ended on a happy note. I liked how you changed up the chorus every time to ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: ​Mirror to Mind.
Hey, HT here to review! Let me say that this feels real. It doesn't feel like the narrator isn't just saying this stuff to say it. You can tell that ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Memories
Hey, HT here to review. It's so hard to review short pieces, mostly because they're so good. That is the case here. But it's also easy in the sense that ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Hope.
I have to admit, when I read your description, the first words that went through my head were: "Help me Obi Wan Kenobi, you're my only hope !" Yes, I ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: Once Upon a Hockey Game
Hey, HT here to review. I got out of bed as usual, dressed in my favorite sweatshirt and a pair of jeans, went to my classes and then went back ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: Amethyst Night - The Secrets of Nightingale Academy - Chapter 7
Here's your friendly neighborhood HomeschooledTeen, ready to knock this one out of the park...er, I mean Green Room. The pictures of what I could only assume were famous witches and ...
Aug 28, 2013 -
Re: You Said Forever but I Guess You Don't Know What That Means (Evermore)
You sent me the link, so here I am. Be prepared for brutal honesty. I looked into your eyes, and all i saw were lies. This line felt a little ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 10
"A rake?" Sheri nodded. I personally would be shouting this, if someone I cared about got smacked in the face with a garden tool. And come on, Sheri and Eli ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 9
How did Sheri sneak back in to the hospital? I forgot to ask that last time. Wow. You did really good on this chapter. The only weird thing that I ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 8
A medical institution, she inferred, should know better than to keep a genius locked in a room without something to entertain her. Aside from all that, she had work to ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 7
Hee Hee. Told you I couldn't wait. There really was hardly anything to mention for this, except a few grammar mistakes. she shook her head out of it, What did ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 6
Aiii! More Sheri and Eli! This really made my day, being posted so soon after my friends memorial. Meanwhile Sheri was half focusing on figuring out the case, which was ...
Aug 26, 2013
