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The Knight of Teens

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Science Fiction Re: The Banished Lycans Chapter 12 The Final

    Wow, Chapter 12 really hits with that intense showdown between Fang and Silas! The power struggle between them is so gripping, especially as Silas reveals her role in this supernatural ...

    Jan 10, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Banished Lycans Chapter 11 long fang.

    This story has a gripping setup and some really intense scenes that immediately draw you in, especially with the vampires and pack dynamics. It’s clear there’s a lot of thought ...

    Jan 10, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: Tomato King, Potato Queen Ch 2 : Food. And Murderers.

    This story was such a fun and creative ride! I love how you mixed humor, action, and world-building to make the scene come alive. The idea of a Vegetable Kingdom ...

    Dec 12, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter Four: The Artifact

    This chapter was packed with intense action, vivid imagery, and emotional tension, making it an exciting and dramatic read. Avery's fierce determination and her volatile relationship with Andromeda re

    Dec 12, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Banished Lycans ​Chapter 3: The Long Fangs part 1 0f 2

    Hey! I just finished reading your chap;ter, and wow—this was such an immersive ride! There’s so much to dive into here, and I’m really excited to break it down with ...

    Nov 25, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter three. The amulet.

    This part of the story really captures the intensity of Avery’s struggle and the strength she has to keep fighting, even when things are looking bleak. The battle with the ...

    Nov 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter Two: Climbing Out of the Pit

    This chapter was truly gripping, pulling me into Avery’s desperate struggle for survival and her remarkable discovery of new magical abilities. From the very beginning, I could feel her pain ...

    Nov 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter one Breaking free.

    This story grabs attention with its intense action and dark, intriguing characters, especially Avery, who is introduced in a gripping prologue that sets the stage for her journey. The vivid ...

    Nov 23, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Nobody Will ever Remember My Name

    Your story is captivating and does a great job of pulling the reader into the narrator’s mind. From the very beginning, the way the narrator speaks directly to the reader ...

    Nov 20, 2024
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Literature Re: The Keeper Of The Vineyard

    This story does a great job of exploring Lily's feelings about her grandfathers vineyard as well as her struggle with memories and grief. I really like how you described the ...

    Nov 18, 2024
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Daffodils mean New Beginning

    This short story masterfully explores themes of love, loss, and healing, blending deep emotional weight with subtle, hopeful undertones. Through Noah's journey, we see the impact of grief and solitude

    Nov 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Politics Re: imagine a world, make this world our world

    This poem is a heartfelt, poignant plea for a world free of hatred, cruelty, and the burdens of injustice. The repetition of “imagine a world” powerfully evokes an alternate reality—a ...

    Nov 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: All I want ♥

    This poem beautifully captures the aching vulnerability of unrequited love, drawing on vivid and sensory imagery to convey a yearning for intimacy and acceptance. Phrases like “I want to be ...

    Nov 12, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Our Song

    This poem captures a bittersweet journey of love with a vivid blend of imagery and emotion. In the beginning, the scene is enchanting: painted skies, weeping willows, and bare feet ...

    Nov 12, 2024
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Dear Society: Mental Health

    As a person who has called the hotline, who has been battling depression for years, who has attempted to commit suicide and not succeeded, and who to this day is ...

    Sep 15, 2018


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