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Re: The Banished Lycans Chapter 12 The Final
Wow, Chapter 12 really hits with that intense showdown between Fang and Silas! The power struggle between them is so gripping, especially as Silas reveals her role in this supernatural ...
Jan 10, 2025 -
Re: The Banished Lycans Chapter 11 long fang.
This story has a gripping setup and some really intense scenes that immediately draw you in, especially with the vampires and pack dynamics. It’s clear there’s a lot of thought ...
Jan 10, 2025 -
Re: Tomato King, Potato Queen Ch 2 : Food. And Murderers.
This story was such a fun and creative ride! I love how you mixed humor, action, and world-building to make the scene come alive. The idea of a Vegetable Kingdom ...
Dec 12, 2024 -
Re: Chapter Four: The Artifact
This chapter was packed with intense action, vivid imagery, and emotional tension, making it an exciting and dramatic read. Avery's fierce determination and her volatile relationship with Andromeda re
Dec 12, 2024 -
Re: The Banished Lycans Chapter 3: The Long Fangs part 1 0f 2
Hey! I just finished reading your chap;ter, and wow—this was such an immersive ride! There’s so much to dive into here, and I’m really excited to break it down with ...
Nov 25, 2024 -
Re: Chapter three. The amulet.
This part of the story really captures the intensity of Avery’s struggle and the strength she has to keep fighting, even when things are looking bleak. The battle with the ...
Nov 23, 2024 -
Re: Chapter Two: Climbing Out of the Pit
This chapter was truly gripping, pulling me into Avery’s desperate struggle for survival and her remarkable discovery of new magical abilities. From the very beginning, I could feel her pain ...
Nov 23, 2024 -
Re: Chapter one Breaking free.
This story grabs attention with its intense action and dark, intriguing characters, especially Avery, who is introduced in a gripping prologue that sets the stage for her journey. The vivid ...
Nov 23, 2024 -
Re: Nobody Will ever Remember My Name
Your story is captivating and does a great job of pulling the reader into the narrator’s mind. From the very beginning, the way the narrator speaks directly to the reader ...
Nov 20, 2024 -
Re: The Keeper Of The Vineyard
This story does a great job of exploring Lily's feelings about her grandfathers vineyard as well as her struggle with memories and grief. I really like how you described the ...
Nov 18, 2024 -
Re: Daffodils mean New Beginning
This short story masterfully explores themes of love, loss, and healing, blending deep emotional weight with subtle, hopeful undertones. Through Noah's journey, we see the impact of grief and solitude
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: imagine a world, make this world our world
This poem is a heartfelt, poignant plea for a world free of hatred, cruelty, and the burdens of injustice. The repetition of “imagine a world” powerfully evokes an alternate reality—a ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: All I want ♥
This poem beautifully captures the aching vulnerability of unrequited love, drawing on vivid and sensory imagery to convey a yearning for intimacy and acceptance. Phrases like “I want to be ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: Our Song
This poem captures a bittersweet journey of love with a vivid blend of imagery and emotion. In the beginning, the scene is enchanting: painted skies, weeping willows, and bare feet ...
Nov 12, 2024 -
Re: Dear Society: Mental Health
As a person who has called the hotline, who has been battling depression for years, who has attempted to commit suicide and not succeeded, and who to this day is ...
Sep 15, 2018
