KitxKat

Beautiful title. THats really good. I'll use purple for grammatical things, and purple for nitpicks. ~Kit Stop the Masquerade Prologue On my way to class, I hurried through the school ...

Hey, Its KitxKat, or Kit. Really. Kit. I'm just review this for you. I don't usually write anything down, I use different colors. Purple for general comments and red for ...

Hey, Kerza! I'm KitxKat, or Kit, and Ill review your work. anything nitpicky is in purple, anything grammar is in blue. Chapter one “Oh, really?” I asked Vincent as I ...

Alright, I'm gonna be a bit harsh with this, I hope you don't mind. Introduction One girl was unaware of what was coming ahead for her. What was going to ...

Hey, I'm KitxKat, or Kat, as I'm trying to be known as, and I'm here to review your works. I feel like it went a tiny bit too fast for ...

Hey. I'm KitxKat, or Kat, as Im trying to make myself known, and I shall be your reviewer. Icefire - part one Queen Saron, ruler of the land Fiamal, watched ...

Alright, I have a few points ~Orginze into paragraphs. It gets to be headache-making. Anything else I have put in purple. In the crystal castle of the King of Camelot, ...

Hey! I'm KitxKat, or Kit, and I'm gonna review your work. Anything I our in purple is a grammar error. Anything blue is anthing else On top of a cliff ...

Yes, it is me again. Grammar is purple anything else is blue. Charlotte ran down the stairs. Her favorite dinner was on the table. Spaghetti with meatballs, in her opinion ...

Hey! I'm KitxKat, or Kat, and I'm here to review your work. Anything in purple will be grammatical, and anything else will be in blue. So, It's good. It's getting ...

Hey! I'm KitxKat, or Kit, and I'm here to review your work. I like this piece. You show talent and promise. BREAK THE CHAINS 1 I first met my future ...

Hey! I'm KitxKat, or Kit, and I'm here to review your work. I find this piece interesting. Anything tips and such I shall put in purple Nullus Spero snapped his ...

Hey! I'm KitxKat, or Kit, and I'm here to review your work. In purple! A few tips~ 1. Remember Capitalizations! 2. Use commas instead of semi-colons before speech. 3. Start ...

Alright. It was long, and frankly, a tad boring. I like your name choices. With names like those, you could have your characters jet-setting around the world, getting up to ...