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Re: Flash Fiction
First of all, Welcome to YWS. I'm Kit, and if you haven't already, go to the welcome mat and introduce yourself. Now, onto your story- It's interesting. I think the ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: ...
I am feasting. The kindle, twigs and sticks are my appetizer. The logs are my main course. Dessert lies forever out of reach. Here they come, timber in hand: coming ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Chemical's React
Hey! I have tendancy to be firm with my reviews. Sorry in advance Charisma and Dylan were complete opposites. Totally different. The only thing that they had in common was ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Twilight *Contains excessive nagging and puke worthyness*
YOU ARE MY NEW HERO!!! That had me ROFLMAO-ing and LOLcanoing and ROLFcoptering Thats how funny it was. I had to go with the text-abbrevations, Sorry about that. That really ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Elle (Chapter 1+2)
This is my first attempt at writing a fantasy, I hope you like it! I know it's kind of long, sorry about that. (: Chapter 1, Ivory and James: I ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Song
Chapter 1 (part1) The rain throbbed hard upon the metal roof. It made a piercing sound that sent a shiver down the spine, although rhythmically pounding like the beat of ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Discovery
You laugh and skip and run like all the other 5 year olds. You like to test your limits. You are curious and daring. What is this? What happens when ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Diary of A Broken Girl [Chapter One]
Hey, i'm KitKat Chapter 1: February 6th I’ve never kept a diary before. The only reason I’m doing it now is because my annoying therapist is making me keep one. ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Forever Young Love (Part 1)
I didn't understand the meaning of loving someone. Sure I said I love you plenty to my mother and father but I never understood the definition of the word. There ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: D.Eagle
Hello everyone this is a story that I made in the sixth grade and tried revising it this is an excerpt of the un-revised version and after a couple a ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Killer Mask [0.01]
“Isabelle! If you don’t get downstairs this instant, I’ll be late again!” Mom’s voice floats up the stairwell. I stare into the broken mirror and finish putting on my makeup. ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Starless (rated 12+ for mild language)
Day 1- September 28th, 2009 I woke up at my usual time, 6:35, to get ready for school. I got dressed in gym shorts and a muscle shirt; I had ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Killer Mask [0.00]
0.00 Perfection is described by the dictionary as the state or quality of being or becoming perfect. In my eyes, perfection is just that. The need and yearning to be ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Uniforms, Gunshots, and Other Misfortunes (1)
Time had passed since my parents had gotten killed. I was a totally different person, who had to adapt to the harsh ways forced on me at boarding school. I ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Popularity Wars Chapter Two
Its me again. JoJo ran across the hallway to the girls' washroom. It wasn't exactly the cleanest bathroom in the world. The mirrors were cracked, and the paint on the ...
May 1, 2010
