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Re: Love IS a game
Whoa, that was awesome. I agree that was both brilliant and disturbing... I’ve come to get you. Come on, I know you can’t resist me. I’ve got one hand on ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: I'll Wait for You
D'awwwwwwwwwww, this was cute. I like it. :) But I can remember the intricate Dances of the sparks And the taste of your lips. Um, dances of what sparks? This ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Cain and Abel
Hi Sar-sar. :) Well, I don't really have time to review this, but I just wanted to tell you how much I love it. (Like, a lot.) I've said this ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Never Your Fairytale
Love it!! :mrgreen: I really like this style, but I'm not sure it quite fits the story. You're talking about a princess here, and I think your careless tone takes ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: In Five Years
Hmmm, nice... not as boring as I thought it would be, based on your spoiler. You're turning away reviews! Anyway, since you don't really seem to want my opinion, and ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Contest entry
Hey Jack, I really liked your poem! You definitely have a talent for imagery. I'm going to point out some things to help you out and hopefully help you win ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Shel Silverstein... Or Is He?
Hey there, Klanet! I'll have to agree with everyone who has commented already, this was absolutely hilarious!! I loved it. The casual tone definitely worked in your favor here. I ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Too Far Gone
Wow. How do you not have more comments on this?? It's awesome. It is definitely not too long, don't cut anything out!! :) Although I do agree with Justagirl that ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: The Feeling
I liked this. You definitely conveyed the emotion well. I found the flow a little off in places, but that shouldn't be too hard to fix. Just take a little ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Buzzy
This was a sweet poem, suitable for your sweet dog. :) I don't really like the way the first stanza is worded, but other than that it was great! Well, ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Confusion
I love this! You definitely portrayed confusion well, and the lines flowed smoothly. And I absolutely loved the end! Am I ever so happy or ever so sad. Is this ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Blank
Hey Polinka! I really liked this. I love your description of the super-messy room. Sounds kind of like mine. It would be really creepy if you got trapped inside your ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Year Zero
Hey Polink, I really liked this! I love your descriptions of what it could be like in the future, and how you started out by making it seem great, then ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Real or not?
Hey, this was very awesome!! :D And well, it is kind of confusing when Brayden talks about being half real, but thats okay. It doesn't hurt to make your brain ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: Bone Queen
Creeeeeepy, I like it. I guess I don't have much to say since everyone who liked it already said it for me. This was very awesome, and I want more!! ...
May 29, 2011
