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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love IS a game

    Whoa, that was awesome. I agree that was both brilliant and disturbing... I’ve come to get you. Come on, I know you can’t resist me. I’ve got one hand on ...

    Oct 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I'll Wait for You

    D'awwwwwwwwwww, this was cute. I like it. :) But I can remember the intricate Dances of the sparks And the taste of your lips. Um, dances of what sparks? This ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cain and Abel

    Hi Sar-sar. :) Well, I don't really have time to review this, but I just wanted to tell you how much I love it. (Like, a lot.) I've said this ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Never Your Fairytale

    Love it!! :mrgreen: I really like this style, but I'm not sure it quite fits the story. You're talking about a princess here, and I think your careless tone takes ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In Five Years

    Hmmm, nice... not as boring as I thought it would be, based on your spoiler. You're turning away reviews! Anyway, since you don't really seem to want my opinion, and ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Contest entry

    Hey Jack, I really liked your poem! You definitely have a talent for imagery. I'm going to point out some things to help you out and hopefully help you win ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Shel Silverstein... Or Is He?

    Hey there, Klanet! I'll have to agree with everyone who has commented already, this was absolutely hilarious!! I loved it. The casual tone definitely worked in your favor here. I ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Too Far Gone

    Wow. How do you not have more comments on this?? It's awesome. It is definitely not too long, don't cut anything out!! :) Although I do agree with Justagirl that ...

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Feeling

    I liked this. You definitely conveyed the emotion well. I found the flow a little off in places, but that shouldn't be too hard to fix. Just take a little ...

    Jun 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Buzzy

    This was a sweet poem, suitable for your sweet dog. :) I don't really like the way the first stanza is worded, but other than that it was great! Well, ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Confusion

    I love this! You definitely portrayed confusion well, and the lines flowed smoothly. And I absolutely loved the end! Am I ever so happy or ever so sad. Is this ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Blank

    Hey Polinka! I really liked this. I love your description of the super-messy room. Sounds kind of like mine. It would be really creepy if you got trapped inside your ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Year Zero

    Hey Polink, I really liked this! I love your descriptions of what it could be like in the future, and how you started out by making it seem great, then ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Real or not?

    Hey, this was very awesome!! :D And well, it is kind of confusing when Brayden talks about being half real, but thats okay. It doesn't hurt to make your brain ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bone Queen

    Creeeeeepy, I like it. I guess I don't have much to say since everyone who liked it already said it for me. This was very awesome, and I want more!! ...

    May 29, 2011


When people are free to do as they please, they usually imitate each other.
— Eric Hoffer