KimLovesU

Thanks for the review once more. I always love improving my writing.

Thanks for the review! I love the idea to put make her eat (not as effective) poisonous berries but I don't think that exist xD Instead i'll make her touch ...

Wow thanks for all your help, this review really increased my writing skills. I know I am very young in the writing buisness and it's great to learn. Thank you ...

Thanks for the review! I am sure going to work on making my character more alive and describe the situations a little better

(I did a review and a comment) This is the comment. Loved your story and I am anxious to read the rest! You are great.

I do admit that the beginning of the story was a little dull. (I'm always wondering how should I start my novel.) I should really work on that. The reason ...

I'm elated that you enjoy this chapter. :) That's true, the kidnappers are always boys, it would be nice to make the kidnapper a girl for a change. Thanks for ...

Thanks for the review! I do admit that I am not the best reviewer, but I'm glad that you liked the story.

Hello Yubbies! :) First of all, you're piece is pretty impressive for a first attempt so congratulations. This is just my personal opinion so don't take it personally but I ...