Kim

i really enjoyed reading this. i like how you created the confusion. it read well. kim

Thank you so much Bear. i have made the changes you found. i appreciate your comments. kim

lol, i dont think i need to critique this, i actually enjoyed reading it. it is so true, the way you ended it surprised me, it starts out informative and ...

i liked this alot. it is sad to lose someone and the holidays seem to deepen the loss. i am glad you posted this. kimi

i seemed to miss this one, i am glad i found it. i agree with cat, dont end there, keep writing . lol. i still love this story bear. i ...

i think you have a good story line going. it got my attention from the beginning. with a little work, this will be great. keep going on it. kim

it doesnt suck gwen, i actually like it. you put alot in a short space. give your self some credit, i have yet to read anything of yours that sucked ...

wow bear, this is so awesome. i can see this as a movie. you are doing so great with this story. definately one of my favorites. kim

i liked it, the only thing i would change is the glistening like diamonds. it doesnt quite fit a dog theme. but other then that i enjoyed it. kimi

thank you mischiefmaker for taking the time to read my chapter and comment. i am glad you liked it. i am now up to chapter 11 kim

wow bear, this is very good, i didnt expect lacy to be killed either. i was as shocked as cat. your writing style is changing so much. i love the ...

thanks for your comments, all of them, i appreciate them . kim

thank you angel, i really appreciate it kim

thank you so much bkwrm, i really appreciate it. kimi

thank you angel, i appreciate it so much. kim