Kilty

Wow! Good to see that someone else is not just a materialistic jerk. Many people are these days. It's good to see someone that cares about the emotions of others, ...

I liked this poem. I didn't really understand what it was about though. You have a good writing style, but I just think you could make clearer what you are ...

Thanks for the advice! The nobles are like her advisors, and they share her fortress. I'll go back and make it more clear. The repeated blows is something I had ...

I liked this story. I have a alien-phobia, but I still kept reading. It is well thought out.

Thanks for voting! I'm glad you find it interesting. I'll probably post more. Why? I'd like to revise it so it sounds better. This is just the "off the top ...

That's really cute. I want a cat! Actually my two lard arse dogs are perfect, I love them tons, but I still want a cat. . . .and a duck.

Thanks for the input. I think I'll choose to leave it in, as there is no where else it could be explained. The story becomes so fast paced, and goes ...

I love this peice--it has a certain haunting beauty. Haunting because of the melancholy tone, but it creates such a lovely picture in my mind.

Wow. When I was eight I was still interested in poop jokes.

Sorry, I tried to indent the paragraphs with the "pre" button, but it didn't work, so bear with me. I hope it's not too hard to read without the indentations.

I thought the language was beautiful. It flowed really smoothly, and it created a nice vision of what time creates. Anyway, it was a really cool piece of work.