Kilty

I like it. Makes me picture a tin roof somewhere in the Mediterranean.

This is a really good peice of work. I like the uncertainty. It makes you think. Not a lot of people can do that without distracting the reader, but I ...

Hm. I catch the point of it--you who do not, look deeper. It's basic love of music. This poem is very artistically written, and I like it.

Wow! Please write more! It is very interesting. Lump. Haha, I like that. Can't wait to read more, good job!

It's very sincere. You don't try to be extravagent with you words. Which is good, it doesn't sound overdone. I really liked this, and I don't read a lot of ...

This is really good. Definetly keep posting more of it.

Very creepy--that is hard to achieve without sounding cheesy--but it didn't sound cheesy. I'm going to go read some more of this. Wow. :)

That was funny. I like the love/bycycle thing. Great

It's revised! Please read!

I liked it, but the end was slightly dark. Poor shoe maker. Anyway, good job! It is a good children's story.

Wow, I love the meter of that poem. It is very--I dunno what words to use. Anyway, I love it.

I agree with Aisu Ookami about that, but other than that, I loved it. It creates a beautiful scene in my head.

That's true. He was a genius, but his writing style was very unique. There are not a lot of writers like him, which is unfortunate, because though it is a ...

This is very interesting. I would really like to read more of it. A few typos, but that's it really. The lack of description doesn't hinder it--it's very easy (as ...

Do you know what I hate most about Paris Hilton? She (supposedly--does anyone believe it was really her?) wrote a book. She's a nasty vain disgrace to humanity. Anyway, you ...