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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Orchids

    This was an interesting style of poetry...I liked it :) It was beautiful and strange, I especially liked the verse: “I'm a mess, Kiss me hard Nonetheless." It kind of ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dance

    This was really good, and I could tell you must have been very energetic when you wrote this (either that or you had just been listening to music). I liked ...

    Jul 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Smoke Filled Forest Eyes

    This was very good! Every word was exactly where it should be with neither too much or too little. It was beautifully written, and the grammar was nearly perfect with ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Power of the Sea

    Hi, I hope you don't mind if I review your poem, which by the way was excellent :) There was beautiful imagery, and the line: "much like life itself" made ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Humanity

    This is amazing. Not because of the way you worded it, not entirely because of your talent...but because it was so TRUE. In order to look at someone else and ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: I'm not depressed.

    I really like this poem, it is very direct and easy to understand...and when your talking about things like depression sometimes it's better to be straightforward and honest. People need ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate

    This is an awesome poem! To think that all those poets (including me I must say) spend all that time making everything exactly right, making all the lines flow, and ...

    Jul 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Tried

    While I liked the subject of the poem, and the honest truth of it's simplicity, it had a few flaws. Maybe it's only me, but I couldn't grasp how the ...

    Jul 25, 2013


Live your life how you want, but don't confuse drama with happiness.
— Ron, Parks & Rec