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Re: You Call Me.
Hah. I can relate. I like this :) Keep writing :) xoxo, Kiicoh.
May 7, 2011 -
Re: So get out
Also, this piece should be rated 16+ or 18+ due to the language.
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: To The Shore
I thought this was pure beauty. It made me feel so much emotion! Emotion that I've felt before... I could feel the pain; the sorrow. Just... Wow. No critiques. Keep ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Bloodsuckers
I didn't like the way "thy" sounded in replacement of "your" in that spot. i did notice that as I was writing it, but decided to keep it as "Your".
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: 5 Reasons Transvestites Are Better Than Everyone
I didn't even need to read half of this to know that this piece is horrid, steriotypical, and insulting. Don't continue writing, for the sake of everyone else, please.
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Thy World - Cry of the slave
Interesting... I don't really understand it, but I kind of like it. It reminds me of Dr. Sues, which I hope you don't find offensive. :)
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Dear _ _ _ _ _ _
(6)With every word you speak. I think you may have miscounted.. Otherwise, it caught my attention; I liked it. I didn't miscount (: (1)with (2)eve(3)ry (4)word (5)you (6)speak Thank you ...
Nov 22, 2010