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Kiaya

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The photograph

    Hey AmeliaCogin Faded; one of those black and whites. semicolons are used to connect two senteces. one of those black and whites wouldn't sound right to me as a sentence ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: bound

    Hey, I think Teardrop covered everything, but I want you to know I love it. I see how you could turn it into a book. If you end up publishing ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: She yelled at God.

    Hey. This was really good. Everyone as felt this way and need reminding. I see no mistakes so I will just say "Good job!" :) I might actually read my ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Can't Write

    Hey, this is Kiaya Michέllē This is amazing toots, but untrue for you. You are an excellent writer keep this up. Will all know how it is not to be ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Grammatical Error?

    It's a beautiful poem. The whole being your own person. I feel you. I looked for imperfections and saw "I Be Me," I don't think that is proper, but leave ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Listening to a Friend (Getting Over It)

    I feel you. It was good. You do have a talent for making the reader feel it and that is a wonderful talent to have. I am sorry if what ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I hold the knife

    It was good. Brings back memories of times I wish I could have got revenge, but everytime I got the chance I would just think of the pain it caused ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I pity You

    By "hapless and without knowledge" did you mean hopeless? Isee nothing else wrong. It rather smashing at that. You say you don't right poems about love very much? Well you ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Pencil

    hahaha so cute. I understand the feeling. When I write I excape my pain and can go anywhere. I hate when my pencil runs away. I can't think anything to ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Ten Pounds Less

    This is good. I feel the craving and missunderstanding as I read it. The crave of being thin is something most girls can understand. Most of us have felt it ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That Sacred Slut

    This was amazing. I love poetry, but it's hard to find some that I can comprehend. I actually understand yours. It transformed and tailored my mood completely like it should. ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If You Only Knew My Name

    This is a beautiful poem. The emotion and meaning is deep. I am sorry that I can't say any origanal compliment awsome because everyone seems to have the same idea. ...

    Mar 16, 2011


Perhaps one did not want to be loved so much as to be understood.
— George Orwell, 1984