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Re: The photograph
Hey AmeliaCogin Faded; one of those black and whites. semicolons are used to connect two senteces. one of those black and whites wouldn't sound right to me as a sentence ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: bound
Hey, I think Teardrop covered everything, but I want you to know I love it. I see how you could turn it into a book. If you end up publishing ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: She yelled at God.
Hey. This was really good. Everyone as felt this way and need reminding. I see no mistakes so I will just say "Good job!" :) I might actually read my ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: I Can't Write
Hey, this is Kiaya Michέllē This is amazing toots, but untrue for you. You are an excellent writer keep this up. Will all know how it is not to be ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Grammatical Error?
It's a beautiful poem. The whole being your own person. I feel you. I looked for imperfections and saw "I Be Me," I don't think that is proper, but leave ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Listening to a Friend (Getting Over It)
I feel you. It was good. You do have a talent for making the reader feel it and that is a wonderful talent to have. I am sorry if what ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: I hold the knife
It was good. Brings back memories of times I wish I could have got revenge, but everytime I got the chance I would just think of the pain it caused ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: I pity You
By "hapless and without knowledge" did you mean hopeless? Isee nothing else wrong. It rather smashing at that. You say you don't right poems about love very much? Well you ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: My Pencil
hahaha so cute. I understand the feeling. When I write I excape my pain and can go anywhere. I hate when my pencil runs away. I can't think anything to ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Ten Pounds Less
This is good. I feel the craving and missunderstanding as I read it. The crave of being thin is something most girls can understand. Most of us have felt it ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: That Sacred Slut
This was amazing. I love poetry, but it's hard to find some that I can comprehend. I actually understand yours. It transformed and tailored my mood completely like it should. ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: If You Only Knew My Name
This is a beautiful poem. The emotion and meaning is deep. I am sorry that I can't say any origanal compliment awsome because everyone seems to have the same idea. ...
Mar 16, 2011
