Kevikur

Hi, Buddy! I read the first three chapters of your story and I can't wait to read the next one to see your writing improve and your ideas develop. Even ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS! I'm Kev, here to review your story! I read your first chapter and came over to give this one a read, hoping that you ...

Hey there, A'dale! I'm Kev, here to review you're very fun and interesting idea! I like what you have going here; there are a lot of ways you can make ...

I like where this is going! A friend of mine is like Ava: short, looks like she belongs in 6th grade, and hates it. She can hold her own, though, ...

Wow! That was action packed with great descriptions! You were quite effective on hooking me from the beginning and kept me reading all the way to the end-- and now ...

This is so simple yet like a breath of air that stings the inside of your lungs-- it hurts inside when you get the meaning of the words, and finally ...

Hey, Green! You have a great idea here and a plot that's rolling. The character's nick names are catchy and have reasoning behind them. I can tell you put a ...

That was absolutely great! So much emotion and detail that you've worked in here, and the way you did it keeps the reader interested. I was scared for the little ...

Wow, wow, wow! Another fantastic chapter! It twisted my insides to read on because you kept it fast paced and there were several things happening, all building suspense. Anyone who's ...

Oh yes! A detective novel in the making! I'm into crime shows and stories, and really interested to see where you'll take us from here. Katherine seems like a real ...

Hello, I'm Kev! I really like the idea you have going here. The narrator sounds life a tough kid in the beginning who has had to put a wall up ...

Hey Deanie! Wow I'm so glad you put up another chapter; I was wondering what would happen next and I wasn't disappointed! A lot of Avril's true character shows in ...

Hey, I'm Kev and I'm going to review your chapter as best as I can! I'm on my phone at the moment so please forgive me for any mistakes I ...

Hello! I'm Kev and here is that review I said I would do. And let me tell you, you have a great story in the making! You have great syntax ...

Just let me finish getting all my giggles out before I review this...Deep breaths...Okay, let's do this. I loved the first part to this and find myself in love with ...