Kepe

Well I have very mixed feeling about the trilogy. I loved some of his original concepts (daemons, aleitheometer etc) however as a Christian I naturally disagreed with all of his ...

Well I did think it would fit into the book, however it was a bit predictable. Stephanie Meyer left out description about that time because, well, we all knew what ...

Topic: way overused, unfortunately. The problem with using an overused topic is that everyone has something better to compare it to. Try adding your own original streak to spice it ...

Overall I liked your story, you do need to be careful when showing the good and bad reactions it sometimes seemed a little chopped up. I also just noticed a ...

Wow, that was funny- especially the charlie scene. The gun part is the only part I wasn't a real fan of, but then the part about Charlie and the gun ...

Well I am not really sure how to take this. I can't criticize it because, well, you said it was just a joke in essence, but as far as the ...

I agree that your rhyming is very interesting, I also like your topic because I think a lot of people can relate to it, however you do need to work ...

I think the topic has real potential, but it did sound a bit childish. I think you could make the poem flow better, and a different rhyme scheme would make ...

I really like the way you structured your poem. It felt like a heart beat, with short lines between every new line. I also liked how you ended with the ...