Kelsi222

Hey! This was nicely done. i actual enjoyed your opening "do you know how it feels", I thought it gave us some questioning. Keep up the great work!! Kelsi =) ...

Hey!! I really liked this!! It did flow very nicely together, and it was one bit choppy!! You also did a great job in expressing your feelings towards this!! Kelsi ...

Hey!! Really nice job on your poem. I liked how you did the refraining in your first ines to the bottom ones! Keep up the good woork!! Kelsi =)

Hi! I really enjoyed your poem. Sure it was a little bit emo. But it made me feel something. A lot of poem's I have ready made me feel blah. ...

Hey!! I really enjoyed your poem. I thought as a girl, it was very impowering, if that makes any sence, espiaclly with the line "And I will be no man's ...

Hey! This was amazing! It started out peacful and happy, which hooked me right away, but then it goes into a more dramtic setting, which was an awesome way to ...

OMG, this was fantastic!!!!!!! Lol, sorry I get excited when I read awesome poem's like yours!! Well this wasen't much of a review, but more so a complament!! So keep ...

Hey!! I LOVE CSI, but I almost never see stories about Greg!! So I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!!! Kelsi =)

Hey!! I thought this was a pretty good poem. I'm not a potery person, so I can't really say much. Lol, well keep up the great work! I really enjoyed ...

Hey!! Thanks for the great reviews!!!!! This is yet again another revised versison. SO PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!!!!!! Thanks!!! Enjoy =) Public Speech- School Violence "Massacre At Columbine", "Terror a

Hey! I am offical in love with this!! Lol. You are doing such an exellent job with it! Keep it up!! Kelsi =)

This was exellent. I defently would make people and myself want to read more!! Can't wait to read the rest! Kelsi =)

Hey! Well this piece was very enjoyable!! I was very cute and I'd like that it was about an older couple! Can't wait to read more!! Kelsi =)

Hey! Thanks for that.^^. Your the only one besides my friend to say that. So it means something different coming from a stranger. Thanks, Kelsi =)

Hey!! I thought this was really good!! I hate to admitt it, but I love stories when students get with the hot teachers!! Lol Well a really great start to ...