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  • Poetry » Other, Fantasy Re: A Dryad's Lament

    Yea, it probably bugged you because the baobab tree is from Africa, whereas we are talking about, I'm not exactly sure... But somewhere around Europe.

    Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:35 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Awe Chapter One; The Wormhole

    Yea, the reason that and/or are in the beginning of sentences is because I have a habit of making run-on sentences and wanted to make them shorter.

    Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:30 pm
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Awe

    And you shall see more.

    Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:28 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Equal and Opposite Chapter One; Many a Night Spent as a Bat.

    Yea, this does need a lot of work. I'll get back to you when I've gotten it edited to my liking.

    Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:27 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Equal and Opposites Prologue; An Idea From Tangled.

    Yea, I might get into that a little. And I might change the prologue. Thanks for the advice!

    Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:25 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Equal and Opposites Prologue; An Idea From Tangled.

    Thanks! And it was meant to be an informational dump. I'm not sure why I meant that though, I might correct it.

    Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:23 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Eyes of...

    Hello again Markontheworld! I like this one just as much as the others. But this time I can't tell what you have shaped with it. Forgive me. Keep it up! ...

    Sun Jun 29, 2014 10:03 pm
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: A tree (2)

    Hello Markontheworld! I like it! This too you shaped into the thing you were writing about, quite imaginative. I wonder what the tree (3) is about, a tree, then a ...

    Sun Jun 29, 2014 9:55 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Seven (II)

    Hello AriaAdams, I'm back! I absolutely loved this chapter, as much as all the others. I cannot wait until I read the next one, so I shall not spend long. ...

    Sun Jun 29, 2014 9:28 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Three (I)

    Hello AriaAdams! It's quality has stayed at the same notch, a beautiful piece. A little faint, but I can't contradict you on that because that's what my pieces are like. ...

    Sun Jun 29, 2014 1:21 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Lemon Shark

    Sounds like it was awesome, and bloody!

    Fri Jun 27, 2014 9:39 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Awe Chapter One; The Wormhole

    YOU MAY NOW READ THIS!

    Fri Jun 27, 2014 1:38 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Awe Chapter One; The Wormhole

    Now you may.

    Fri Jun 27, 2014 1:38 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Lemon Shark

    Cool! Thing is I don't have a TV.

    Fri Jun 27, 2014 1:17 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Lemon Shark

    Cool! It's weird... I could find a cause for a skin condition in a Lemon shark, and yet I couldn't find that fact.

    Fri Jun 27, 2014 1:01 am


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