Kelpies

Pretty good! I like a good fantasy book, but bear with me while i be a little nit-picky. 1. Your villain might need to devolop a little, I mean, if ...

Pretty cool! I saw another author that had dedicated their writing to you, I didn't catch the username, but they are writing "Fern". Anyway, thought it was pretty good, and ...

Pretty good! I have good news and bad, but good comes first! like it, it is a joy to read. It almost sounds like Dragonvale, a book I once read. ...

Sorry, I accidentally said submit before I had typed anything! Anyway, here for a review. Liking it so far, I guess that you will expand on the people's characters and ...

Wow, many people, including me long to be different. But the things we would do to feel that way illustrated here, it's just mind-boggling. And terrorists- I have no idea ...

Wow, I really like that it seemed that you were going with the text of the bible in a different way, then it turned into something completely different. The serpent ...

This is a great story, it is sad, yet, holds a lot of meaning. That's all writing is, words. Words written down and assembled like a puzzle into a meaningful ...

All the emotion in this poem is incredible. Sadness unspoken. I would like to know though, how did she blind them? Was it that they were blind to her suffering? ...

I am so worked up right now about all the emotion that I can feel in this story that I can barely write this review. I loved it, but there ...

WOW! I loved how you put it together, but you could work on your spelling some more. I also loved that you have a cliff-hanger, that will get people who ...

Wow, did this really happen to you? It sounds like it did. Just out of curiosity, how did the dog get the squirrel's head off? Just wondered. I think you ...

Good advice! I mean, before I started writing my self confidence was nill. And when I discovered my talent and how I could take my creativity without embarrassing myself, it ...

It is really sad, and I could feel confusion, sadness, and a certain emotion that I cannot put my finger on. It is difficult to imagine that you could lose ...

Are you serious? This is amazing! It flows just like you described the tears, like rain. Keep it up! I can barely keep up with poetry, but I manage. I ...

THIS IS AWESOME! It is real poetry, I love how it flows. All the emotions you put into it, it is enough to break one's heart. You can feel the ...