Kelpies

I like it. Mystery, suspense, I think it would make a great novel, just think about it. I don't particularly like looking for errors, so I didn't find any. I ...

It's a nice way to voice an idea, and a good idea at that. Why do we humans always want the answers? I can't enjoy a good mystery until it's ...

I have no idea why, but that's funny! I really liked it, my question is, if the deer was that intelegent, why didn't it find some herbs and cure itself? ...

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I gobbled up the last few chapters. The finale? I need the last chapter!!!!!!!!!! I ate up the last chapter so fast that I couldn't

Oh great! Another cat that, although she has a better reason that Hawkschreech, is getting in the way of the prophecy! Sure, Moon is a nice cat and all, but ...

Wonderful! A little repetitive in places, but otherwise great! As I have said before, I like the manner in which you write. You should really think about getting a book ...

Hi! Me again, this one has one thing I would like to poke a finger at. And that is when Goerge said "gone missing. Vanished. Gone". I'm just not sure ...

I am not going to take long on this review, too many more chapters to read. But I think that the quality of this story is. It going to diminish ...

A great work, I like that you took into consideration all that they would have actually learned had they been on this planet in that century. I also like how ...

A poem I read again and again. It is realistic, and yet, fantastical. It is like tinker bell is poetic language for drugs. Sorry if I'm wrong. I usually don't ...

Nice. I like that you put in a typical annoying weird kid relationship. I also like that in your story everyone is supposed to have a purpose. I believe so ...

Who ever said this sucked? This is one of the best poems of this sort I have ever seen. Of course, the only ones I have ever seen are with ...

I personally liked the ending on the original, but this one is ok too. Many times even your average person feels that way, that is why many may really like ...

This isn't written badly! It's magnificent! Poetic, it feels like a classic, I don't know why. It reaches out to the reader. I never was one for a love story, ...

Pretty cool! It takes a good book to captivate me. Yours succeeded. It's vague, yet detailed. Normal, yet Fantastical. I'm looking forward to learning more about Rudi, and to see ...