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Hello! May I say this is true to all of us (at least me) and I really enjoyed it. The lines are a little lengthy and I would have seperated ...

Hello! May I say this is true to all of us (at least me) and I really enjoyed it. The lines are a little lengthy and I would have seperated ...

Hello Rosan, Very nice poem you have here. The short lines work well and speak a thousand words! I really don't have a complaint, I love the on and off ...

Hello inkwell, this poem is certainly unlike anything I have ever read. I enjoyed reading it a lot though because it showed life and the little things that happen, the ...

Hello! I liked the flow and words in this poem. The use of metaphors/similes paint a picture in your mind and I loved the picture I got. The only thing ...

Hello, Goldi here!! Welcome (we joined on the same day *gasp*) haha on with the review! I have a question, is this poem about an animal or human or just ...

It sounds like you already are a fairly good English speaker. Main thing is to keep practicing, that's the key to everything. Talk to lots of people and write stories ...

This story is amazing! The first line "..He feels the wind blowing in his face, he feels a rush of excitement in his body, he dosen't know what it is, ...

I loved this is was very funny but there is a few things... the line "please no, nut-meg" didn't work for me. I think it would sound better with a ...