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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: True Love's Worth

    Hey, flash fiction! Hi Dracula, it's that guy outvaders again. It's pretty rare to see a short story actually land in the literary spotlights, so I decided to see what's ...

    Jun 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Perfect Match

    Hey Biscuits, it's me, that guy outvaders. I'm lining up this review for my third star (yay), so let's get right into the news. -Perhaps the greatest strength of this ...

    May 31, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fried Expectations

    Hey Dracula, it's outvaders here. It's a pretty nice Review Day today. Oh wait. I'm really late to the party. I know this work has long been out of the ...

    May 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: A sweet little story!

    Hey rohan, it's me outvaders. On my search for sweet little stories to review, I just happened to bump into this sweet little story of yours. Let's get straight to ...

    May 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Baguettes and Beggars

    Hey MJ, it's me again. Yeah, I'm back at the review game once more. This is a pretty little short you got here. Though you invested a ton into the ...

    May 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Dear Mom

    Hey MJ, it's me outvaders. I was looking for some shorts to review to keep me busy as I was travelling, and somehow I ended up here. I've got quite ...

    May 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Deepest Desires

    Hey Pomeroy, pretty solid-looking short right there. I'm just scouting for some shorts to try out a new, rapid-fire style of reviewing, and here I am. It's pretty short to ...

    May 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Guadalupe The Mosquito

    Okay, alright. To be honest, I just got here because the name "Guadalupe" is also a name of a place where I've been a lot (I live in the PHL). ...

    May 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: when words were clearer read than heard

    Hey Light, it's ya boi autbaders. You knew this review was coming in hot mmm Unlike the last poetry review on you, I'm gonna critique it instead of just analyze ...

    Apr 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Other Re: Yanderetalia Simulator Chapter 1

    Hetalia. Yandere simulator. Teenage author. All in one fan fiction. Oh baby, this is gonna be a fun, fun ride. Hey Norge, it's ya boi autvaders. Here's the review I ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: .

    Note: I read both extracts, so I'll review both, since they're interconnected. Hey Asith, it's me outvaders. Here's the review that you asked for. Before I say anything else though, ...

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: The Other Side

    So, you have to bring it down to 1000, right? Welcome to flash fiction. Hey LilyRose, it's me outvaders. I came here upon your request to review this work. I'm ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: My Seveenteenth Birthday

    Hi Quieen, and welcome to YWS! Before I say anything else, I'd just like to say congratulations on getting one of your first works in this site. It's a pleasure ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Empty Draft

    Hey Kara, it's me, outvaders. I'm here with the review I promised. I'll cover both Entry 1 and Entry 2 in this review. Strap yourself up, cause unlike my previous ...

    Apr 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Missing

    Hello Amelia, it's me outvaders, just passing by for a review. This work caught my eye because I saw it was in the "horror" category. If I'm gonna be honest ...

    Apr 15, 2017


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— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind