Kazeybear

I don't have time for a full review right now, but good god woman, you are amazing. I envy your talent, I really do. ~Kazey

Indeed my friend, indeed.

Thanks for your review!

Thanks for your review! I'm British, so we spell Civilization with an S.

In ancient times, when a city was destroyed they purified the ground. She feels like she's being destroyed, but she wants to be pure when she's gone.

Ah, then it is spelt pallor. And yes, I would to read your other work!

Thanks Ejay! I've reviewed yours just now! ~Kazey

Thanks fro your review. The 5th stanza is intended. My idea was that a grandmother was explaining the reality of life to her young grandson, and got carried away. Realising ...

Thank you. I have incorporated some of your grammatical changes. I really need to start proof-reading... Thanks! ~Kazey

Thanks Jonathan! It's nice to know that you want to keep reading my poetry, and quite honestly, I want you to keep reviewing it, becuase I love some of the ...

Thanks Braiden! ~Kazey

Well, ermm... Thanks very much. It's nice to know my poetry hit a chord. It's what I aim for, after all. ~Kazey

And welcome to YWS!

Well, thank you. ~Kazey

Thanks Jonathan! I've added another stanza to hopefully add imagery, and fixed the second-person problem. And yes, I do sing. I'm in a choir (not the church-boy type) and I ...