Kaylyn

Edited, hope it lokks better now.

This sounds alot less like a comic book now, thats better. Also Heather never blows her candles out! [quote]A brown-haired, pony-tailed girl approached them, fury etched on her face. Neither ...

I liked it and can't wait to read more. *runs off to read more but runs into a tree* sorry about that. Great job, and good luck with you writing.

Thanks, like I said, I don't do well with poetry.

Okay okay, I'll look over it again, just so you can post the second part *grumbles and mutters to self* here goes: I looked up into the sky hoping for... ...

Sometimes you can be the best squad and hit it every time in practice, but get to a competition and just be horrible. You only have two minutes and one ...

Thanks this is a rough draft. I am in my second year of cheerleading and definately enjoy it. I cheer for a gym instead of a school, its really great. ...

She is 5 years old in human years but physically and mentally she is 21. Anyways I am editing it majorly. I just wanted to see what people wanted to ...

Thanks, you helped me out lots guys, I'll get right on editing it!

Thanks, I certainly will.

Thanks I'll do that. I can't let you know the answer to that question, it would give things away.

Oh sorry about what I said about rating it, I see it now. *blushes and runs away*

Well done, it brought a nice closure to Fred and George, one that Rowling did not give, or go into detail about. (WHY WHY WHY did she have to kill ...

I want to read them but I have to save up for them.

I love Twilight, Harry Potter's okay, and Eragon is okay. Atemis Fowl is boring until you get into but its not bad. Okay anyways Bach to topic. Lord of the ...