Kaylyn

Yes, thats right about the catholic church priests. I agree with what has been said above. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or any errors on puctuation. This is a ...

Since this is such a short post I can;t really comment on much. I'll try my hardest though. Your grammar and punctuation - I can't find any major mistakes in ...

Oh, this sounds good. I can't wait to see where the story goes this time. I know that th past few have been great. I don't think I remember reading ...

Thought I would review your poems. After all just returning the favor I think that the poem sounded a bit forced and I couldn't really graple with a flow. It ...

oh, I knew it a flashback. Such heartless people. Okay now to the critiique. I think I found one typo somewhere at the beginning of the story. I can't remember ...

Oh creepy, I can't wait to see what you do with this whatever you do with it will be great. You have me wondering what happens next. I didn't see ...

Thunder clapped and lightning bellowed. This was the night of the council of Elders. loved the opening sentance. You did this very well. "A storm is brewing in the east, ...

lol. I loved your poem. know i willl be obsesses with finding a rhyme with purple now... anyway great flow and i thought it was a very clever poem. i ...

You did very well. This story was very descriptive - unfortunately for when I was reading about the electric chair. It was a bit scary and sick... but if thats ...

I think that you started out the story very well with the storm. You let the reader know about the character such as shes a girl, tall, shy, and has ...

OMG!!! I lovede this series. I first saw it in a book store but then saw it in a public library. I then snatched them from the shelves and read ...

Interesting title. The story was a bit dull, maybe if you didn't sound so repetitive... Anyways this could be an interesting story but it needs some polishing up. Hopefully though ...

You did an excellent job until i got to the last few paragraphs. So I'll only critique your last few. Here goes: I was in and out of the house ...

I woke up and tried to stand, but something held me back. All I could do was move my head so I bent it towards my body to see where ...

Great story, I just couldn't pass it by without letting you know I enjoyed it. Later, If you want I will ghive you an in depth review. You had a ...