KattieCurtis

Thank you :) and i like the message :)

I kind of get it, but then again I don't :P I like the first part, i feel that makes sense but the last part i just can't get. Could ...

I really like this :) it needs some work defiantly, particularly the last part, it kind of seems like it shouldn't be there. Try bringing it in with a rhythm ...

Ok right, i'm finding this new set up really hard to work can someone please help me :P

I shall get working on making it longer ;) Thank you, I agree it needs more to it, an explanation and reason, I know why I wrote it and what ...

''I want to give him the pain that I have to deal with every day'', thats brilliant!!

Exactly what I was going for, thank you :)

I relate to this poem so well and i'd say nearly everyone can unless they've been very lucky. Good poem, very honest! I love it :)

''my leaf green eyes '' thats very pretty. Not the absolute best but i liked it, good job for your first poem keep it up :)

Thank you for the corrects i didnt read over just kind of threw it out there, thank you! Thank you for your comments much appreciated :)