Karzkin

Spot reserved! I'll be back later.

Hello :) I'll review this one eventually. Can't do it right this second, but I will - perhaps later this evening.

I'm usually not a fan of rapid-fire comments saying "this is great" and nothing more, but this has to be one of the greatest things I've ever read, on YWS ...

Thanks Em. Now I see where you're coming from. You make some good points. I agree, some lines are too long. I'll try to resolve some here: No hole is ...

Personally, I can't see anything at all wrong with the rhythm. I thought it was regular as clockwork. Seriously, two people have mentioned it now - am I blind or ...

This is a nice little thought, and well communicated, but this is not a haiku. Read this or message me for more details. K.

I like the revision much better. You've even improved on my suggestions. Nice work Em :)

Spot reserved! Too busy right this second, but I'll get a review in this arvo! :D

Thanks Em :) Yeah, the first line is taken from the QANTAS ad on purpose. It's supposed to make you picture the scene of those kids in white at Uluru ...

Hahaha not at all sarebear. This is definitely not a dig at anyone in particular. This is just supposed to be informative, and humourous at the same time :P You ...

Why do you waste your time here? Get published already!

Title has been changed. Thanks for the suggestions.

Reserving a spot! Review on its way.

Hahaha my bad. Well spotted :P *fixed* I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for your reviews! Amelia, I agree, the last line is just terrible. But in my defence, I did write it in ten minutes at 3am :P However, I ...