KanenRenoir

Thank you for the crit! :D

Okay, so I really don't have huge plans for this. Like I said, it's for a characterization camp. Basically the person helping me is giving me assignments and I am ...

Let me point out that there are actually two MCs. The girl, and the bad guy. It's fantasy, but also romance. I figured it would fit better here. The girl ...

Thank you all for reading this. It was in fact just a writing exercise, something to get my creativity flowing and get rid of my writer's block. I really don't ...

Thanks Hawk! The reason I figured he wouldn't wake up is because he's lost a ton of blood, so I doubt even pain would wake him.

Yeah, really this was just something like a diary entry, just to get stuff of my chest. But I may develop it. I don't know. I'm kind of into my ...

Ok, well, I decided to get rid of the chapter two pt two I have on here and make this that.

I thank you all for your comments. One thing to point out though is I know just how amazing Dracon is. He is Goliath. But what makes up most of ...

I changed the story to add in the edits. Thanks so much for the help. I decided to go with a crossbow and on a balcony.

Crit ticket if you want it. I'll get to this later on in the week. What I've read is really good.

Nice. Interesting. I want more. You leave the reader with a very good cliffhanger. :D

I definitely think this is interesting. You have something here. I can't wait to read the rest.

Let me point out that Lu'nac is not the bad guy. He's yet to be introduced. And this is only part of the first chapter. Thank you all for your ...

I'll try and get to this in later. *crit ticket*

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