Kamas

Hiya Skip! Kamas here. Points for originality that's for sure. :D It is quite nicely done at that. But! I do not know it that breaches codes of Plagiarism. The ...

Hi there FlyerS Kamas here to review: As smorg said it immediately reminded me of Boom Boom Pow by the Black Eyed Peas. But beside that, I really enjoyed the ...

Hi Daisy! I'm Kamas and welcome to this site! Is this your first poem? If it is then I am here to review. Give you some constructive criticism to help ...

Penzpickle! *snugs* I'm gonna review your lovely poetry. :D Driving through the trafficked streets, Backed up at the top of the hill And we can see for miles (and miles). ...

Stanzas : They are all different lengths and sort of contained onto itself individually. The nicest poetry has stanzas the work alone and together at the same time. It's very ...

This is interesting. It sounds seems like an advertisment/ you are trying to sell it or something. I'd work on the imagery in this. Be more descriptive, tell us more. ...

Hi there! Quite a nice poem! I enjoyed it. The biggest thing that bothered me: The abuse of the ellipsis (the ...) I don't really mind it in poetry but ...

Hi there! Lovely poetry dear! It has very nice imagery! Very nice. My biggest problem with this right now is the fact that there no punctuation in the poems at ...

I hate to say I have never read it. Why are you nervous though? Just read it, if you don't like it put it down and move on. If you ...

Very nice. Very very nice. This poem has a nice message to it. Some suggestions: 1) This poem is a bit of a huge run-on sentence. There is only a ...

Oh Hawkie no reviews? Well let's change that! I loved the first one and this one was lovely too. Suggestions: 1) For people who don't know the story of Link ...

Hi there Dream! I'm Kamas here to review. I really enjoyed your poem, it was quite nice. Somethings I noticed: Flow It seems to me that the flow in this ...

Lovely! Just lovely Aqua! This poem had such beautiful imagery! I adored it. A planted seed, A trail of doubt, A whispered secret That was never let out. This was ...

I definitely agree with some posters here. Sarah Dessen is a very good romance novelists. I adore all her stories. I also suggest: The Memoirs of a Teenage Amnesiac By: ...

The Riddle by someone not worth my small memory space. It was just..... Boring! And trust me Never ever ever ever ever ever ever read "Autobiography of a Face" by ...