Kamas

Hiya Young. Here as requested, though you seem to have quite a bit of reviews as it is. I'm not the greatest for stories but here we go: Language: Definitely ...

Hello my dear Pudin. Here as you requested. As I am not the greatest for story reviews, please excuse me but I'll try my hardest. Interest Now this was interesting,definitely ...

I am your second reviewer? Oh goodness yay! Well my dear, welcome to YWS and just so you know, PM me at any time for a review or go to ...

Hiya Lifeblood. Kamas here for a quick review. This is an interesting poem, I found the idea enjoyable and original. But the poem itself is a little bit immaturely rhymed. ...

Welcome to YWS my dear! I do hope you feel welcomed. I'm Kamas, and I've been too busy to review lately, but I have some time now so here we ...

Hi there! Kamas here to review. Now, this is a lovely little rhyming poem and I hate to critique these war poems harshly. I really did find this one to ...

Hi Gal! Here as requested. This poem blew my mind. Just fabulous. The way you strung these words together was almost flawless. Your metaphors, similes and imagery in general was ...

Hey there Redbird. Kamas here for a review :) A storm is coming, You can see it, over there, The air is stifling, you can feel it, A storm is ...

Edit: There is a forum called 'Book Reviews' People there will be able to recommend fabulous books for you to read. I'll happily look through my bookcase for you as ...

Hi Flower. This is quite short to be a poem. I am not sure it would count as a quote though. It also seems sort of heard that before, see ...

Hi there! Kamas here! I really loved this. The rhyming scheme was a bit immature but it ended up to be quite lovely. They met at a ball She wore ...

Hey Pudin :D Here as requested! Lovely poem, such length always impresses me. Demeter has gone over like everything. So mine will seem like repetition to you, but I'll try ...

Hi there! Kamas here for another quick review before I run off to bed. As Conrad said, your poem was right on the line of what I like to call ...

I can very well see it as a pop song but it immediately reminded me of the song "Feel the Beat" The problem with lyrics is that you have to ...

Love, you keep bumping this thread when you were asked by a moderator not too. And though you are asking for more and more reviews your tone to the more ...