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Splodey wrote a poem! Zomg *happy day* This is really nice, I must say I really enjoyed the imagery you created here. Really love the language you used to create ...

Here as requested Mia! Now, you've gotten a lot of really decent reviews, and I personally am terrible with critiquing long stories so I'll give you a few tips/ stuff ...

This is quite adorable! Really. Has a sort of Shel Silverstein touch to them. Really quite cute, normally I don't enjoy these as much but this one made me laugh. ...

Hey Kamas here. Now, if what Silversun said is true, I highly advise you to change that. Plagiarism is bad anywhere, and I sure don't want you in trouble. If ...

Kamas here. :D As I am on an iPod, I'll only give you my two cents. I apologize. Now as Classy said. Not very original, it's nothing new. But it ...

Hi. Kamas here. Well to state what the others said. This site gives you critism for you to improve your piece and writing in general. If you only wish opinions, ...

Dradian! Welcome back. :D Now this was lovely. Really it was. I get the 'Where the wild things are.' reference. It's too short to really go into detail, but it ...

Now, you asked me to look at this. I did, read it, loved it, and now you have me stumped. I must say I'm impressed, your poetry (from what I ...

I think amber made a mistake and posted her own work here. So you've only gotten one review! Oh noes! I must fix that, well I'm Kamas here to give ...

Here as requested Matt :) Sorry about how long I took to get around to reviewing this. Now this was a lovely, quite original poem I really enjoyed. :D Great ...

There are a lot of places to rant around this site about the Twilight series. It's very split up. There are twilight lovers and haters and people who are in ...

Hey Ed. Sorry it took me so long to get here. :wink: But I'm here now right? Well I always love your poems but here we go: The night she ...

I couldn't review this even if I wanted too. It's a very personal poem and if it helps you feel better that's the whole point. The poem itself needs some ...

Oh my dear JD. I've looked at this and I can't even review it, it is just so adorable. The rhyme is off, the flow is too. The language is ...

Hi there Emma. I'm Kamas :D I'm here to give you a few quick suggestions/nitpicks before I run off to *try* to fall asleep. Now this is a cute little ...