Kalliope

Hey Snoink, this is going to be a brief one, but I thought you may like to hear another opinion. I didn't like this as much as your usual writings, ...

Hey Ducati, I love the idea of your song. Very sweet and lovely, indeed. You have a neat flow and your description is wonderful. One or two small things: 1) ...

Hey little_miss_obsessed, glad you're writing lyrics. They're a fun medium to express yourself just as much as to communicate a message to others. You have a lovely approach here, nice ...

Hey there, I'm sorry, this took forever, but now I'm here, so I hope you'll forgive me for letting you wait for such a long time. Preface: I thought the ...

Hey beemarie, catching up on the story again. As in the last chapters your description was wonderful and stylistically I think you are doing very well. I enjoy reading your ...

Hi Ducati, sorry for the delay, but here's your review, as promised. Generally I liked you idea and Janey seems a very sweet little girl. I felt for her. However ...

Hey Demeter, here's your crit as promised. For you, always. However I fear that I'm not going to be a whole lot of help with this, especially not on the ...

Hi Kirsten, since you asked for an overall opinion rather than nitpicks I'll skip those. But I'd look at the tenses again in places. Just something I noticed once or ...

It is absolutely on my "To Read List", but I haven't read it yet. I did however see a series on television, which gave me the impression that it is ...

I've read all three of them in German and I thought they were amazing. The two that play in the Inkworld are a whole lot darker and all, but I ...

Hey there, that's a good start you've got there. I enjoyed reading it and you have a very nice flow. :roll: Nitpicks -- I know, annoying, so let's get this ...

Hi adi, this is a nice set of lyrics you have here. Relatable theme, good length. Neat. I do however have a few tips for you: 1) Repetition -- Repetition ...

Hey Janey, too bad no one's critiqued this yet. =( This piece has a good flow, as I didn't stumble over anything while reading. That's a very good thing, because ...

Hi Poetic Glow, I must say that I enjoyed reading this very much. It sad, but not in a too heavy way. Coping with emotions through poetry is always good, ...

Hey, I absolutely loved this. I'm usually not big on fantasy, but I really wanted to read Scavenger and I am very glad I started to do so. As I ...