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It's a reference to both, though the latter more directly.

I'm lazy and that was the prompt that spoke to me so nyeh. :P And you definitely helped. This little review of your has given me lots to think about. ...

Well, you just have to figure out what the missing piece is that makes the things make sense to you so you can incorporate it into your poetry so that ...

Haha. Thank you. It was fun to write.

what my eyes to spy I spy with my little eye... (I couldn't resist even though by the time I post this, you'll have fixed it.)

But it was intentional in that you left it in once you saw the connection. ;P Re: enjambment, the length or fragmentary nature of the lines wasn't what stood out ...

"Fertile" is a lot more fitting. I'll have to check out the other two later.

Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it, though the gendered differences in the compliments at the end aren't very complimentary. As for the suggestion about line breaks, ...

I tried the consistent line lengths first, but it felt off, so I went with each line = an idea on its own in addition to the straight reading.

I wasn't sure where else to break the lines. I considered posting this as a prose poem but didn't feel like dealing with the "this isn't a poem because it ...

Your review was quite helpful. It gave me some ideas for tweaks to maybe improve this. Though I'm keeping the "to" because the seeping colors are doing the blurring, which ...

Aw.

Thanks for the review. There are some thing that I could use some clarification on: The only thing I would change to make the flow less rocky is "seep in ...

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading.

Yes.